Multiverse Adventurer

love the story but i feel like some suspense and comedy would be even better                                                                                               

Im interested for sure. There is definitely face slapping, but it is done in a really believable way that im really enjoying. The system makes sense, and while I do wish it was explained a little more what certain things mean and how they work, its not affecting the story and of things are explained too much it would actually be a demerit since it would cut into immersion. As it stands, it's well balanced and really enjoyable. I suspect that if it remains on this level moving forward, the story will quickly become one of my favorites. Nicely done.

New story by one of my favorite authors.

Its a comedy packed novel with enexpected scenes nonetheless.  I haven't read a Sci fi novel before though, but it seems this is changing my mindset on it😌

"Yes Mom, I'm awake."

"C-come on Doc ..!" i got an eletric shock.

Brenn sighed in distaste before saying in a hushed tone "Oh alright, But please, For the love of Ara, Keep it down, There are times when i truly think you're insane

Pada saat bangun pagi seorang wanita berkata pada suaminya, "Tadi malam Aku bermimpi engkau memberi aku sebuah kalung berlian di hari Valentine ini. Bagaimana pendapatmu mengenai mimpiku itu?".